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There was a small contest called "Write Right" in my workplace which I participated in . The contest was that we had to write a story/poem but the catch was it should contain exactly "50 words" only. I was lucky enough to get my write up published. :) Here is my contribution....
He stood helpless as his love walked away from his dreams of togetherness.
He gazed at his best friend as he stole her away with every step.
The image blurred with tears in sight, as emotions of -
treachery in friendship,
love's betrayal, anger,pain -
trickled as he stood alone.
All Alone.
20 comments:
Its a nice one.. but 1 Q..why are most poems sad?
wowie :)) congos !!
:-)))
Just came thru sandhya's space.....
Its tough actually to bind words in just 50 words....
One need to have a good vocab fr that fr sure:-))
was a good read up althou...and I agree worth to be published:_))
@ pav.. thanks sweety. Well maybe ive gone thro sad phases more than happy ones ..lols.. apart from that i Myself dunno why my poems end up sad.
@ divya.. thank u
@ chakoli .. yea it was a challenge to write anythin in 50 words. but am proud again as they chose my write up as the best one among all entries.. hehe.. thanks for the comment
Hi
Nice write up n d whole story is narrated in precise words.....
Nice attempt! :)
Hi Musheer ,
I am really not a blogger just stumbled upon your site while I am trying to find a friend after 12 years .He is from Katihar,Bihar. He has your name Musheer Alam. I know it sounds impossible but I might get lucky some day. Pray that I would find him one day.
thanks mush for visiting my blog. and reading my poems.and leaving such a sweet comment.
after so many days of blogging first time finding a muslim blogger. great to i am not the only one.
@ Ishqia.. loved your blog too, anyways have replied ur comment on ur blog :)
Keep in touch and keep updating ur blog
1st visit to your blog!!
really liked that write up there thou it was kinda sad...
looking forward to read more frm ur blog....
cheers
Hey...few words... but awesome content....
@ thanamoi.. thanks for visiting my blog. Hope its not the last time..lols. Well most of my write ups end up sad .. i dunno y .. sure will update the blog ... jus a lil hectic these days
@Akshay.. yep few words.. that was the challenge.. thank God i could meet it
Sure it wont be the last time!!! :)
dude.. hi again
took some time reading ur blog..
nice blog.. u can write good poems in english.. for me words come only in urdu..
see u around..
i think from first post to the last u have improved really alot..
i mean i m talking about ur writing style..
@ishqia
Hey thanks for taking so much time out to read my entire blog .. wow. I feel elated that someone read my entire blog and liked it :)
Yep my writing style has improved a lot .. and it should to after all i have so many readers now :)
welcome welcome..
@ Sandhya and @ Sameera..
Thanks for your comments... had replied your comments.. but dunno why it didnt show up here.. found it missin today.. so put one up
He was better off standing alone than with them.
@ solitaire.. I agree with you :)
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