Tell Me
Tell me the way you tell me
A look in your eyes and I see,
How better a person I can be.
When your eyes close, its only me they see
When open they search all over for me.
I know what lies deep in your heart
But still I would want you to tell me.
Tell me what lies in your heart
Tell me the way you tell me
Tell me what I see in your eyes
Tell me, just tell me.
Your silence speaks what your heart wants to say .
Though you are close, you still seem far away.
Outside a mere friend is what you pretend,
But hey girl, I know you deep inside.
But still I would want you to tell me.
Tell me what lies in your heart
Tell me the way you tell me
Tell me what I see in your eyes
Tell me, just tell me
Every dream - (together we will share)
Each difficulty - (together we will bear )
Tell me -
You will always be there
Saturday Morning
2 years ago
6 comments:
Tell me...Tell me! Tell me?
Dude, what do you want her to tell you? "Me"?
hey mushy!!!!!!!!
when u write somethin n call dat its ur own,
dont take very recent stuff n put dat into ur creations!!!!!!! atleast take some oooooold stuff so no one knowwwwwws!!!! see i TOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOLD Ya!!!!!!!
;-)
chaoooooooo
Hey Vinayyyy .. well my creations are my own .. By Jus having a line "you are my sunshine after the rain" in another song too doesnt mean its copieeeeeeed dude .. lol ..as long as it delivers the meaning, I don care if these words were already written by someone in some other song.!!!!
tell u what?? but hey apart from the funny mushhhy part i think it's kinda cute!!! i hope the next poem doesn't title " hear me hear me more..."...
lisa
Hey Miths
The poem is wonderfull and there is no words to express how wonderfull and meaningfull it is.You are really great.
Good Keep it up
Good Luck for the next one...
Doll
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